Six Sentence Sunday 4/6

This is week 4 of 6 in an excerpt from the novel I’m writing called Bonded in Exile. Thanks for following every week. Hope you’re enjoying it!

This excerpt involves Riley, a fallen angel, and Emily, a Nephilim he’s been hunting. He’s finally found her and evaded Silas, another fallen angel who’s been assigned to keep Emily alive.

“If you think Silas is a good fuck now, just wait until he gets done with your head. Don’t you get it, Emily, you’re a trophy. He doesn’t give a damn about you; he’s using you, I’m using you. The only difference is, I’m not lying to you about it. Has he convinced you to help him find the book yet? Oh, he’s very good, so I’m sure he has.”

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14 responses

  1. Sounds like Riley is the one messing with her head.

    November 27, 2011 at 8:58 am

  2. mirriamsmyth

    Riley’s fury just jumps off the screen. It’s intense to read, to feel that much rage come through just a few sentences. Well done!

    November 27, 2011 at 11:20 am

  3. Intense! So confusing for the heroine! Well done.

    November 27, 2011 at 12:13 pm

  4. How’s a girl to know WHO to trust??? Excellent excerpt, always leaves me wanting more.

    November 27, 2011 at 12:31 pm

  5. Powerful six…I feel sorry for Emily…what a spot to be put in.

    November 27, 2011 at 12:37 pm

  6. Monica Enderle Pierce

    Blunt and brutal words. And great characterization; I hate him already.

    November 27, 2011 at 1:06 pm

  7. Caught between a rock and a hard ass for sure. I don’t envy Emily one bit. Great dialogue. You can hear the fury in his voice.

    November 27, 2011 at 2:49 pm

  8. Alix Cameron

    I hate him already too! Great six.

    November 27, 2011 at 5:31 pm

  9. “I’m not lying to you about it” – freaking fabulous!

    November 27, 2011 at 7:22 pm

  10. This story keeps getting better! Let me know as soon as it’s for sale. I love this world you’re creating.

    November 27, 2011 at 7:45 pm

  11. A lot of different conflicts playing out in such a short snippet. Very intense!

    November 27, 2011 at 7:56 pm

  12. Bitter, party of one!

    November 27, 2011 at 8:05 pm

  13. At least he’s honest! 🙂

    November 28, 2011 at 6:00 pm

  14. Now that’s a lot of anger, though perhaps anger coming from honesty. Hrmm.

    December 2, 2011 at 3:20 pm

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