Six Sentence Sunday 2/6

This is week two of an excerpt from Bonded in Exile. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments. Hope you’re enjoying it!

Riley, a fallen angel, has just found Emily, who is a Nephilim he’s been hunting. 

“Stay away from my sister, you heartless bastard!”

“Too late,” Riley sneered, leaning closer until his lips nearly touched Emily’s. “I can’t wait to find out how far the apple fell from the tree.” His hateful eyes grazed her lips and he froze; he caught her chin in a biting grip, using his thumb to pull down her bottom lip as her tongue shot out to cover the nick from Silas’s fang.

“Getting kinda careless there, wouldn’t ya say, Emmers? Don’t tell me Silas has turned you into a fangbanger?”

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11 responses

  1. mirriamsmyth

    So… Where’s Silas? ‘Cause Riley’s kinda… creepy. Great six – I can’t wait for this story to be done! I’m so gonna own this one!

    November 13, 2011 at 1:19 am

    • He is a creep. Silas went after Riley, but Riley double backed his trail and got to Emily. Silas won’t be out of the picture for long and it’s about to hit the fan!! Thanks for following, I’m gland you’re enjoying it! I hope to have the book finished by the end of the month. Then it’s time to shop for a lit agent 🙂

      November 13, 2011 at 9:28 am

  2. I’m with Mirriam – Riley is very creepy!

    November 13, 2011 at 7:44 am

  3. Yes, Riley IS creepy but that’s good writing for you! Excellent excerpt, can’t wait to read the entire story!

    November 13, 2011 at 11:43 am

  4. Sue

    fangbanger is a bad thing?

    November 13, 2011 at 1:15 pm

  5. Great six…very intriguing.

    November 13, 2011 at 4:56 pm

  6. Intense and getting tenser! (Not sure if that’s a word, LOL.) Great six!

    November 13, 2011 at 7:01 pm

  7. Vamps *and* angels? Oh my! Mmmm.

    November 13, 2011 at 7:17 pm

  8. I love the conflict you are weaving. Well done.

    November 13, 2011 at 9:57 pm

  9. Ouch, fangs. Creepy.

    November 13, 2011 at 11:51 pm

  10. Awesome six! I’ve always loved the name Riley. I look forward to seeing what you have for us next Sunday! Have a great week!

    November 14, 2011 at 7:44 am

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