Six Sentence Sunday #18 (Wk 7 Cont.)

I originally intended to run a six-week excerpt from Until Darkness Comes, Book 1 of my Redemption series, but I’ve decided to continue it for a few more weeks. I hope you’re all enjoying it! Thanks for reading and leaving your comments.

Background: Olivia has just figured out that the guy she’s falling for, isn’t really a guy at all–he’s her guardian angel…

All too soon the blissful heat disappeared, along with the touch of Liam’s lips. Emily opened her eyes to find him staring down at her; his dark violet depths held an unspeakably beauty that verily stole her breath. 

She looked away, unable to hold the intensity of his gaze for another moment. Glancing down at her wrist,  she gasped. “They’re gone-my bruises are gone! How is this possible?”


5 responses

  1. mirriamsmyth

    Love the emotion, the intensity of this scene. Great six!

    October 16, 2011 at 1:03 am

  2. What a beautiful six!

    October 16, 2011 at 7:26 am

  3. Jennifer Lowery~Writer

    Awesome six! Can’t wait to find out what’s up with the bruises!

    October 16, 2011 at 7:42 am

  4. Lovely six, lady. Thanks for sharing.

    October 16, 2011 at 11:06 am

  5. I can see his beauty and power and her confusion. Very nice six.

    October 16, 2011 at 6:33 pm

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