Six Sentence Sunday # 16 (5/6)

Sorry for the missed week. This is week 5 of my 6 week excerpt from Until Darkness Comes.  I hope you’re enjoying the continuation. Thanks for reading and posting your comments. Have a great Sunday!

“Emily, your wrist!” Liam lifted her hand and gently turned it over, carefully inspecting the dark purple bruises that marred her pale, delicate flesh. “That son of a bitch!” he growled.

The heat of his anger blasted into her like an inferno. Her pulse quickened in response to his energy surge, maybe he wasn’t the only one who could feel the other’s emotions, because what she  got from him right now was a whole lot of rage, possessiveness, and something else she shouldn’t even be letting herself consider. This was just crazy, he couldn’t possibly be projecting his emotions onto her–could he?

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8 responses

  1. Ooo, I think he might be!

    October 2, 2011 at 8:58 am

  2. Randi Alexander

    Great, emotional six, Melynda.

    October 2, 2011 at 10:57 am

  3. Great characterization. An intense and emotional scene too.

    October 2, 2011 at 12:27 pm

  4. “…a whole lot of rage, possessiveness, and something else she shouldn’t even be letting herself consider…” Oh, that’s just HOT!

    October 2, 2011 at 4:26 pm

  5. Interesting last line

    October 2, 2011 at 4:49 pm

  6. Intense, emotional six. Great job 🙂

    October 2, 2011 at 5:36 pm

  7. Excellent balancing job on the emotions here. Well done!

    October 2, 2011 at 9:05 pm

  8. Intense!

    October 2, 2011 at 9:36 pm

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